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Model Manners / by Mistress Scarlett (G)
Apr. 18th, 2013 08:57 pmTitle: Model Manners
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Mistress_Scarlett
Fandom: Discworld
Genre: General
Length: Medium (Words: 17,973)
Author's Summary:
It's Del Ironfoundersdaughter's first day on the Watch. The streets are mean. The crooks are, well, crooked. And Mama isn't here to hold her hand anymore. (Well, actually she is. Just don't tell Sgt. Anthracite.)
Review:
Del works so well as the daughter of Carrot and Angua and her (mis)adventures are spot on for typical Ankh-Morpork. The writing is great too - it manages that quirky Discworld voice and makes a fair attempt at juggling the multiple points of view that are typical of Pratchett's style of plot development (though the individual snippets of plot could be a bit longer each just to help with flow).
Model Manners (on ff.net)
Author:
Mistress_Scarlett Fandom: Discworld
Genre: General
Length: Medium (Words: 17,973)
Author's Summary:
It's Del Ironfoundersdaughter's first day on the Watch. The streets are mean. The crooks are, well, crooked. And Mama isn't here to hold her hand anymore. (Well, actually she is. Just don't tell Sgt. Anthracite.)
Review:
Del works so well as the daughter of Carrot and Angua and her (mis)adventures are spot on for typical Ankh-Morpork. The writing is great too - it manages that quirky Discworld voice and makes a fair attempt at juggling the multiple points of view that are typical of Pratchett's style of plot development (though the individual snippets of plot could be a bit longer each just to help with flow).
Model Manners (on ff.net)