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Family Bonds / by xXDesertRoseXx (PG-15)
Feb. 15th, 2014 09:21 pmTitle: Family Bonds
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xXDesertRoseXx
Fandom: Harry Potter
Genre: AU, Potters Live, Harry's Twin is thought to be the Boy Who Lived, Severus mentors Harry, Super-powered Harry
Length: Very Long (Words: 59,406 - WIP)
Author's Summary:
When, after that fateful Halloween night, the wrong Potter twin is hailed the Boy Who Lived, how will Harry's life turn out? With a power he knows not, an ancient prophecy and one Severus Snape practically raising him, interesting at least is a given.
Review:
A great, long fic in some popular genres. The story is really interesting and, though very long, really kept me clicking that Next Chapter button throughout. The author is a decent writer and good plotter but I think she needs to work on writing character dialog in voices other than her own. There's a lot of world-building and characterizations are believable with the possible exception of Snape (though I think it's within the norm for Snape-mentors-Harry fics in general). Overall, a very good story.
Family Bonds (on ff.net)
Author:
xXDesertRoseXx Fandom: Harry Potter
Genre: AU, Potters Live, Harry's Twin is thought to be the Boy Who Lived, Severus mentors Harry, Super-powered Harry
Length: Very Long (Words: 59,406 - WIP)
Author's Summary:
When, after that fateful Halloween night, the wrong Potter twin is hailed the Boy Who Lived, how will Harry's life turn out? With a power he knows not, an ancient prophecy and one Severus Snape practically raising him, interesting at least is a given.
Review:
A great, long fic in some popular genres. The story is really interesting and, though very long, really kept me clicking that Next Chapter button throughout. The author is a decent writer and good plotter but I think she needs to work on writing character dialog in voices other than her own. There's a lot of world-building and characterizations are believable with the possible exception of Snape (though I think it's within the norm for Snape-mentors-Harry fics in general). Overall, a very good story.
Family Bonds (on ff.net)